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建议

Our school is preparing to hold(prepared被动不合适)

Festival will be held

It includes singing songs

There are.are your fans 此句有两个谓语动词，there be 和主系表结果冲突。

可改为A number of students in our school are your fans.

We will feel pleased(pleasure 名词放feel后不合适)

英语作文评价大全

说真的，我很讨厌淅沥的小雨，它们是那么的缠绵，总会使心烦涌入心头，惊涛拍浪，挖心的难受．因此在这样的雨天我没有在雨中漫步的情怀．但在北方由于在黄河以北降雨量少，注定淅沥的小雨会是夏天的常客．于是我也有些厌恶夏天，好在夏天还有一位代言人—暴雨，使我对夏天有了一丝的眷恋．

我喜欢暴雨有种近似痴迷的程度，因为暴雨下出了北方人的豪爽，给人一种亲切感．下暴雨时我喜欢将窗子开到最大，将手臂伸出窗外去感受豆大的雨点落下时针扎般的痛，那时却感觉不到疼，有的只是毅力的考验．张大嘴努力的呼吸泥土的清香那是一种久违的香气，它会使我想起曾今那充满鸟语花香的大自然．

今天又一场暴雨过后，我遥望天际发现天空是那么美，头顶的一片天是那么的湛蓝，蓝的没有一丝杂质，它又是那么的飘渺，好像是七仙女抛下的一件蓝色的薄纱在空中飘舞．不远处还是灰色的，印在房屋上竟是土黄色，那种颜色给人一种压抑的感觉．于是我寻找蓝灰的交界处，那里本应是逐渐的过度色，而大自然却巧妙的嵌进去一朵还未完全舒展的云，刹那间我感受到了活力，那是生命的诠释．突然明白再阴的天也有晴朗的那一刻，再黑的夜也有黎明出现的那一刹那．

那是一幅美丽的油画，是大自然给予人类的享受，更是自然给我们敲响的警示钟，如果没有人类保护大自然，恐怕以后连那雨过天晴的后的一丝感动也会一去不复返，至少我们会失去对生命的另一种诠释

怎样评价一篇英语作文

首先,应当理解题意；其次,应善于谋篇布局,而不是生硬得翻译,在每个论点开始时最好要有一定的连接词,比如first,second,third;first

of all,then,in addition,what is

finally；再者,应当善于运用高中阶段所学的各种句型语法,比如定语从句、同位语从句、动名词的符合结构等等还有一些常用的句子,应善于积累；最后就是整体的事了,段落安排是否合理、书面是否工整、尽量减少语法错误和拼写错误、字数在80到120之间.

帮忙点评一下英语作文。

last summer是过去时态整体作文应该用一般过去时。

里边还有好多小语法错误。

比如a change的change怎么加了复数

英语作文评价

字体如果不是很严格，应该还是可以 的，

有一些语法问题，还有就是有的表达略微有点中式

比如，第一句中的known 应该改为knowing,第二段的第一句中的got 改为getting

因为照片不是很清楚，但是我个人觉得，第一段最后一句，很中式英语，最好改掉。

我就大概扫了一眼，应该还有些问题，可以找英语老师改一下

onesmart

英语作文这评语怎么解释

运用英语写作的能力,作为四项基本语言技能之一,其重要性是为英语教学界所公认的.然而,在当前的英语教学实践中,存在这样一种现状：教师重视英语写作训练,但却忽视对学生作文的反馈,未能正确认识自己在学生作文批改中所扮演的角色.翻开学生的作业本,看到的多是简单的对、错符号或分数或等级,几乎没有评语,至多是千篇一律的Good\/Not bad\/All right\/Ok或Perfect.以致许多学生对教师的这些简单评语感到莫名其妙,无确认识自己的写作水平.以下是本人结合自己的教学实践和亲身体会,就如何写好英语作文评语,及时向学生反馈指导性的意见,浅谈一下自己的几点看法.一、评语中的语法修改不仅要让学生知其然,更要知其所以然.中学生在学习英语的过程中,最大的难题就是动词及其用法.由于汉语中动词没有时态变化,英汉的这一差别往往会干扰学生正确使用英语时态.如在表达“我差点忘了.”此意思时,学生在作文中写成“I almost forget.”.其实,此例句独立表意,不受上下文的限制.在评语中,教师应引导学生进行这样的逻辑思维：The action\"forget\"just now happened,so we should use the Past Tense.Its use is something like the verbs-know\/think\/recognize….Do you still remember the sentence-“Sorry,I didn't recognize you.\"学生写记叙文时常混用时态.如,When my cousin was a child,he likes sports and reading.He played volleyball,basketball and so on.He is reading many books about scientists such as Einstein,Madam Curie,Edision etc.And he wants to be a scientist after he graduates the university.

英语作文在线点评

happen everyday 改为：happy every day 每天很快乐（everyday每日的）

in my home,has a robort改为：There will be a robot in my house.=There is going to be a robot in my house.=We will have a robot in my house.

it will be do dull jobs everyday 改为：It will do dull jobs for us every day.(will+动词原形，be\/do 不能用在一起）

On hoilday,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.-改为：We'll go to Sydney Opera House to spend our holiday.或者用：During our holiday,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.

Go to there is my dream改为：Going there is my dream.(用动名词做主语，there前省略to)或者改为：Because I am looking forward to going there for a long time.

请为我点评英语作文

如果是essay对话，我觉得最好用五个段落：

Introduction

Body paragraph1

Body paragraph2

Body paragraph3

Conclusion

总体来说，还是很不错的，不过，最好不要用Firstly，secondly 来开始一段句子，应为那样会显得很无聊，而且没有变化感。

试着用些比较有趣的开始，或者直接去掉Firstly，secondly 就可以啦。

还有就是每一个 Body paragraph 都先用一个statement然后再去补充，意思就是多写一点。

给55分。

求点评高中英语作文

大作文错误：

It reminds me of my own后面要加上experience之类的，或者my own改成myself

because of lacking of experiences compared to the adults 改成 because of a lack of experiences（没有lacking of这种表达，只有be lacking in 和 lack(动词)和 lack(名词)of）

instead of point them out point改成pointing

by our own 改成 on our own

还有许多虽然没错，但是不地道的地方

大概19分

小作文：

on every Monday 删去on

The most popular activities are computers\\singing and pianos 改成 The most popular activities are learning computer,singing and playing the piano.（activity要体现动作，不要用像computer这样的单独的名词）

make their school life wonderful wonderful换成colorful更好

spend time to do 改成 spend time doing

大概11分

似乎你基础语法学得不是很好（也有可能是你一时粗心），文章里有不少低级语法错误，不过语言表达能力还好，但是这么多低级错误一般打不到最高档的分数。

希望对你有所帮助^_^

高一英语作文评语(2)

Dear Q12,

Hi!I am one of the students chosen to solve the problem,and I want to tell you what is love and friendship and how we feel and think.

hi是不是应该改成 hello，everyone，毕竟你是面对很多同学说的。

what is改为what are

think后面应该跟 about them

What is love?All in all,where there is no cruelty,there is a beautiful world.Everyone always give others a hand each other.I also think everyone don’t like that there are too many churchyards everywhere.

where there is no cruelty,there is a beautiful world这句话你想表达什么意思

改为 if there was no cruelty,it would be a beautiful world.

Everyone always give others a hand each other.

改为everyone gives his hand to another.

I also think everyone don’t like that there are too many churchyards everywhere.

我没看懂

If you stay there a moment,and watch the insects flying in the warm summer air,and listen to the soft wind breathing through the grass,you will understand how quietly they rest,the sleepers in that quiet earth.

stay a moment改为 stay for a moment。

breathing改为breezing

the sleepers in that quiet earth.是什么，你指grass吗

If you want to know about love,you can read the《WUTHERING HEIGHTS》,and woman named Amity Ballonet who was born and live in the north of England,is also the place where《WUTHERING HEIGHTS》happened.

去掉书名号，英语里没有书名号。

and woman named 改为 and the woman named

live改为lived

is also the place划去。

And the friendship is a thing that everyone wants to have,especially men.For the friendship,even you can lose life.For the friendship,even you can lose everything.

even you can lose life 改为 you can even lose your life。

后面同理。

但把everying改为anything。

It belongs to a spirit which every men can uphold it.

In a word,world need love,and the world also need friendship.Please imagine it a second,everyone helps each other,we live each other happily in the world.That’s a haven of peace,is a ideal society.

world need love改为the world。

need改为needs

唉，难改啊。

建议你重写吧

中文思维太明显了。